Amazing story! The best I've ever read. Writing quality- Amazing. Barely any grammatical errors. It's easy to read and understand. There's nothing I can complain about.Stability of updates- I recently just read this so I can't say much. But the author is on a hiatus(I think) so I'll just give it 5 stars.Story development- 5/5 again. The story moves along nice. It has the perfect pace and it doesn't skip over anything. Author explains the different plots very well and doesn't leave anything unanswered.Character design- 5/5 but if I could I'd rate it even higher. I've never been more attached to fictional characters in my life. Side characters are amazing they all grow. Jeremy, Jakes brother, is one of my favorites. I started off hating the guy but by the end, it made me wish for a brother like him. The way he grew and interacts with Jake is simply perfection. Don't get me started on the main family. Noah, the twins, Zeke, and the parents are all written beautifully. Finally, the main character, Jake. He grew so much throughout the story. From not interacting with anyone and being scared of people to going to a boy who's able to freely talk to people(albeit not perfectly) was amazing to watch. He's still not perfect and is still far from being 'normal', he grew a lot. But hey, who really is normal? Everyone has their quirks. And that's one thing this story is amazing at showing. World Background- Good. 5/5 for me. Other- Author if you're reading this, I want you to know how much I love this story. I would love for you to come back as soon as possible to continue this story, but I know you probably have things going on in life. I just wanted to let you know that this hands down is the best novel on this app.
Summary: Excellent story (top in genre) to get you hooked but be aware it's like cigarettes which are on low supplyPros:Good and unique backgroundExcellent circumstances that leads to s*xAlive Characters with clear personality describedCons:Author has tendency to strech out things (a single arc took 250 chapters)Unstable chapter release : Kind of depends upon authors mood and seeing the latest trend of updates this novel might stop halfway...
Honestly one of the best novels, if not the best on this appYou can stop reading nowThe only way I know of to stop is if I have a good 👍 and a bad day and I can get back up and running 🏃u200d♀️ in time
This story is for you If you line modern lifestyle thrown into immortal/mystical hidden word. Novel titles like - I may be am immortal, dragon King's son in law, resonates deeply with this sort of writing style. A quick touch of cultivation thriller + modern world anarchical situation ie no one sect/family having sovereign supremacy ensures unique plot unlike the xianxia/wuxia trope where mc literally provokes the supreme top dog. This story development is 5*, character development is 5*, content delivery is 4*, meme reference is 5*.But the story progression is too slow! I would recommend sitting out this one initially and binging on it after sometime as the author leaves you asking for more.The last thing I would say why I would recommend this story to you because is the uniqueness of this story. Everything is done here on balance (uptill now) there's no fail safe for the mc in this story like future vision, hidden cultivation, or back to time or some dao granting your invulnerability. Instead there's this **** grandma who would give you enough safety to make sure the generation is continued if MC's life is at stake on the very expense of his *yang-ki*. Yes the great grandma a top dog needs his internal energy to sustain her powers.
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