I love the character design and all, but I can't seem to get into the story. I don't think I'll keep reading it, but who knows. Updates are not the most stable, and there are a bunch of grammar mistakes. With so many, it's hard for the story to flow, for me at least. I have a couple of complaints.1. Ranking system is too complicated in terms of name.2. Organs. I think you should put the name of the actual organ, because I have no idea what is what3. You deviate from the plotline too much. I get that it may be necessary for the story, but it really doesn't let the story continue. It just gets interrupted and it gets hard to get into it. Maybe put a bit of the plot and then a shorter version of the side character story. Once in a while is okay, but you do it too many times.4. Grammar is iffy.5. Goes really fast.
The story is good, and the mc is not completely stupid like in other novels. The world is that of spirits and ghosts, the mc uses his abilities to hunt down these ghosts and gains the energy need to use his system. Honestly, probably the best of this week's trial reads but not my cup of tea.
sloooooow updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaates! Can you please do it 3 or 2 chapters per day ? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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