Note: Updating Stability and World Background will be set to 5 stars since this is a review made when it was still a trial read.Writing Quality(4stars):It's pretty decent, haven't a lot of problems with itStory Development(4stars):Pretty good, I like the idea. The MC's phone cheat isn't uncommon, but I like how it's done. The plot is basically him raising a pet store, hopefully it stays that way unlike other pet store novels.Character Design(4stars):Characters aren't paper cut-outs, well at least from what I've read.
I saw a few reviews where the reviewers say that author didn't get the genders right. That's not true at all. Author actually nailed the genders all the time(I don't know why do you need to make such a big fuss even if he accidentally made a typo once or twice). Also MC is not a simp or a slave. I don't even know where did that come from? MC only acts subservient towards his master due to the system, but he's not a simp at all. I made this review in order to balance the ratings.
Writing Quality - Top notch.Update - So far, so good. Although it relatively new.Story Development - Excellent so far.Character - Well written and designed.World Background - The layout is great so far.Keep up the good work.
I love this novel, but romance side is verryyyy low, like 210 chapters and they had only a kiss…but friendships and the plot twist is very interesting!
Self review after 150+ chapters of writing this novel. Ofc, allow me to shamelessly rate it 5 stars without stating the reason why just like the other shameless authors out there.If you have any questions, you can ask in this review and I'll reply to the best of my abilities.First and foremost, I'll be blunt and tell you honestly that I have planned to there be a yuri at the very end of this story.The Yuri that I meant here is not explicit. It will only be mentioned and that was it, as it did not have a major relation to the plot. It is such a big world so it would only be natural that other people would surely have this kind of relationship. This is what I meant when I said that it has Yuri.However, since a lot complained about it, I decided to scrap this idea and just settle in a world that has no Yuri. It has no major part on the plot anyway and was only there to spice things up.Next. Yes, for the last time, this is harem.The harem won't grow explosively as I wanted the MC to slowly develop his relationship with his girls until they reach that point of their relationship. There will be smaut, but as I am still currently learning this Dao path, please allow me to make mistake and improve as I write. I always read all your comments but please be informed that I wont be able to reply all of them.If you have some questions, you can ask here. If you don't have any, then why are you still here? Go and read!
The Cracker was now more uneasy then ever. Him, the greatest gladiator of the arena, one of the strongest to ever set foot in the bloody arena, afraid of a mere boy that could use some flame magic?
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