Rosalie's Daughter (#Wattys2016)

I was expecting a villain but it's portraying a character that's mis understood, if we take the transmigaration of soul apart. The protagonists are not suppose to be that mindlessly arrogant? It's just another story of a ML lead earning profits and collecting girls for his Harem. I don't see a villain there, the discription doesn't match the story except the system. Not for me i guess.

1 Translation done by "Novelsaga" are horrendous. After all, they ninja-ed the translation. Like literally garbage translation. The previous translator was far better. No amount of godly editors can save up Novelsaga's trash translations. 2a. Story development : Its a typical "band of brothers" kind of xianxia. Mixed in with some Stephen Chow-ish humours of the 90s, and this is what you get. 2b. The story can get ridiculous at times, but its still very, very enjoyable. In "Xianxia common sense

Finally, it came back! My god, I almost died from waiting.As for the review,Hmmmm~ I actually don't know what to say. Maybe "Stop wasting your time with my review and start reading already!"Also, don't forget to write a review and vote for it with power stones.On behalf of our dear author, I thank you!(LOL, I look like someone who was paid by the author to write a review.)

I NEED MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!!  I NEED MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!!  I NEED MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!!  I NEED MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!!  I NEED MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!!

Ok so I'm going to be shameless and just say I don't really understand ANYTHING THATS GOING ON!!! I was thrown into a story that seems like 5 chapters in on the first chapter, and I'm quite confused and it just sort of dragged and dropped me here. I'm not saying it's bad, in fact I quite like it, there is just so little information I'm super confused about it all! Maybe add a couple lines of backstory in the very first chapter to explain what's going on. I mean I can get the gist of it. But it's just really confusing for me😓😭 maybe a prologue would be cool! But it seems interesting to say the VERY least! Keep up the good work author!-Hugs and kisses from expectant reader!

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Just one problem It's the bad English Sometimes he's taking in past tense,Sometimes future tense, or he just straight up combined all the tense in one single paragraph.Because of that it's  hard and confusing to understand what he's trying to say.(at least for me)But other than that the story is pretty good.

Love the pace of the story and how he explains everything and not just a info dump first chapter. Author really knows how to set the pace of his story.