I really like the story and I was excited about the main character actually telling someone the truth in the beginning but I can't read it anymore because of the non stop descriptions on everything. It's like you went and found every word you could to describe one single thing every paragraph. Sometimes it gets so bad you take up a whole chapter. If you could dial it down then I think you have something here.
I don't want to be that guy, but if you fuse genes with too many organisms, you will effectively explode. Think of it as a "NO MAN SHOULD HAVE THIS MUCH POWER" type of thing.Also the World Background is like a copy and paste ROBLOX character, absolutely terrible.
sorry bro I can't even start reading the book because of the synopsis It's as if it is a Chinese young master novel.I will not comment anything on the novel as I have not read it,but I suggest changing the synopsis
Merely a month ago, Mini was a nurse in the local hospital, where, as fate would have it, Adarsh had come to visit an ailing friend; the moment he saw Mini, he fell in love and there was no doubt in his mind whatsoever. From their meeting to marriage, everything happened so quickly that Mini didn't even get a chance to think about it; it is said that young love has the life of a flickering flame. It was indeed a surprise when Adarsh had asked Mini's mother for her hand, and the marriage took place as quickly as the proposal. The marriage had been simple because Mini's father was no more and her family had no money to spend on weddings, but it was not lost on anyone that Mini had been very fortunate in her partner and the life ahead.
He keeps dodging and weaving pretentiously that it makes me sick. Who would be this brazen in front of a life and death battle?! Me, you say? True, I guess.
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