I do like this story but the romance is to slow in the hole 804 chapters out right now he has kissed once but she immediately forgot about it and lost her feelings for him.Besides that the beginning is certainly the weekest part you basically just thrown in the deep end no background no previous life just we still haven't read about the temple he grew up in anyway still very much worth a read
This is has interesting story which many readers likeIt is funny in some way you use bad words for the character to express his/her action.keep up the good work m8 ^^
I swear to God this story is interesting. The person who wrote this is very creative I insist that he/she keeps it up.This writer is exactly saying what is happening and I support them on tha
Loving It . Hope it will have a great future πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
author I love how u started to set up the characters and world and your take on this genre but you update this book way too little,and I realy think if u put the time into this book it could be a banger.so while u do have your first readers interested why dont u try(and i know writing is hard af) to update the book a little more plsπππ
Quit while your ahead the dialog in this is horrible. Its like reading a chat log for example,Char A says "..." Char B "...." Add that onto the fact that the entire premisis of the novel is some S&M fans fap fantasy its not worth the loss of brain cells.
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