This is detailed review written after reading all the published chapters (95 chapters).Writing quality: 4⭐ The author has stated that he is not a native English speaker so some mistakes are expected. There aren't that many spelling mistakes but grammatical errors are there. So four stars are enough.Story development: 4.5⭐ A very fast paced story with little info dumps. The author however slows down the story for a few chapters to explain a few things and all that. Overall the story isn't full of chapters in which MC is breaking through or creating pills using different ingredients. After all, we are all culture lovers.Character design: 3.5-4 ⭐ The characters are certainly good and the harem girls are strong and not like those weak girls in Chinese novels. It is mentioned that even the MC is afraid of them at certain times. I would have given more stats but we don't recieve that many character interactions and details until the second volume.Updating stability: 4.5⭐ The author updates seven chapters a week and I haven't seen him missing any updates. However, I would personally like ten to twelve chapters a week but if it will decrease the quality, please don't do it.World Background: 3.5-4.5⭐ Again I can't decide how many stars should I give. At first glance, the world is like any other Chinese cultivation world but later on we find out that it's a little darker than those world's, especially the Central continent. I am still accumulating information about the world and I might update this later on.Overall 4-4.5⭐If you love dual cultivation and harem with a MC who doesn't care about any young masters or royals, this novel is perfect for you. As I said earlier, this is a fast paced novel so you won't be bored sitting around waiting for the MC to breakthrough or creating a pill. I hope that this review helped you understand the novel.
Hmm well as a story goes, this is one of the worst, it is poorly written there is no sense of fluidity in the story and furthermore having a completely overpowered main character means that there is no conflict and a story with no conflict isn't a story its just wish fulfillment. Also, after reading over 100 CN LNs I am getting really tired of the wow look a coincidence, OMG this coincidence just coincidenced out of the coincidence generator, and DAMN that plot armor coincidence just saved the MC from dying to that random overly idiotic supposedly genius antagonist who coincidenced upon our MC during his killing of the antagonist's coincidental subordinate! YAY, this is more of a rant about the genre as a whole bad writing does not a good story make.
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