Rise of the Sword God Successors(A Death Loop Across Space-Time)

"yeah this is spatial locket there are spirit stones within it and all of us brothers should focus on our training.

need improvement on writing to avoid double wordings, but still enjoyable to read

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The story is good. It is reworking the "Isekai" genre from not falling to one trope; a vengeful hero thrown to the side or a harem, ecchi story while in a world of agony and suffering. Overall, it takes pre-existing concepts and reworks them to fit the overarching theme of the story. Totally not here because a certain someone asked.

The book is well-written with excellent pacing andexcellentcharacterdevelopment, especially Dimitri. Thequality ofwritingand grammarisexcellent,producingasilkyandengagingread.Genrefans willbesatisfied withthe characters.