Rise of the Last Homunculus

At 25 chapters I would say that this is a good novel.Pros: Cool/Intetesting systemInteresting system for all characters Cons: Somewhat cringe dialogueCharacters not fully developed and feel hollowNot the best use of the system imoPersonally not ruthless enough and like I said I feel like he’s not using the system to it’s fullest abilityWhile I stated a lot if cons, I like the direction that the story is going in and have no big problems with the storyline and the cons are all minor things. I would recommend.

I must say, the author is really doing well on this one. The book has an interesting plot. And is good to read.But I must say, there are mistakes in the book but they could be ignored.I urge you to give it a try

i just want start that i have no idea about stability of updates(i just idk)and the writing quality is ok so {three star} for both of them, also i am just at chapter 33 so idk what happens at ex:page 114 or something happens idk what it is,i am just at page 33.let's start with world background,as far chapter 33, world building is justsecond coming of gluttony but watered down,it fantasy world with levels, that it really it and the levels do not made a difference,MC just one to two shot everything so why? have it at all? to be honest with you. i thought the world would be like idk a woods with fog and it night time all around at the start, and when the MC show to a town it just reveals to generic fantasy,what if? instead of fantasy it dark fantasy with horror, like the town is silent hill but in a fantasy setting and everyone is off,for word background {two star} for being second coming of gluttony butless interesting thing in the worldfar as story goes,MC get op almost at the start,then kill everything and get all the women in 30 feet radius of him,that it, very early on the MC get out as a demon two times but nothing happens,MC just run out town,no one comes get him,no wanted posters,nothing happens with it,might as well not have happened in the first,which is a problem that comes up over and over again,the MC can do the worst thing possible and nothing bad will ever come to him at all.{one star}character are just a mess,every one but MC and his women he simp toare just forgettable and bland,so to is the MC, but the MC is well the MCso you can some what remember him a little bit( i say that but i forgot his name lol )if you cut 60 to 70% of the character,the story well mostlystay the same,most character are just there to die,that it.for the MC idk what his deal is, he just kill anything, that not personality, that a hobby,he and female lead hate each other very much but for no reason at all?!?! that do 180 and love each other?!?!?!(one star)   WQ:3SOU:3SD:1CD:1WB:2the total score is 2.0 but maybe a 2.3 or2.4

very promising story.. and i like it 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😘😘☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Tirando o fato do Mc ser um virgem fraco e patético, a história é boa, o Mc tem um QI razoável, a contrução de mundo é boa, a escrita é boa, e a construção dos personagens também.Se você não tem problema com um Mc que é mais fraco do que os figurantes, além de ser um virgem com baixo QE. A história pode ser boa, todo cenário da história é boa e a escrita também, tirando o personagem principal é claro.

This meat could normally only be consumed that same day or at most the next, before decomposing. When we want to preserve the meat we only have the salting method, where we introduce the meat in containers filled with salt for its conservation, although the majority of the tribe does not care, I am bothered by the salty taste that the meat has. preserved in this way despite washing it before cooking.

"what do you mean?" Lusamine frowns

"Do you got everything ready?"