1 star purely cause of horrendous editing. words are cut in the middle with new line. sentences get new line in the middle of it. either someone is spamming enter through the whole novel, or someone is copy/pasting from bad html page.
Honestly, it's kinda ass. Just a run of the mill, MC fucks everything and everyone noteworthy and they all love him unconditionally. The plot is all laid out in front of you and is completely linear, everything happens right after the previous event, there is no returning to clean up or previous mentions of anything that happened before its just "this happens, and then that happens, and we're done". The characters don't develop in anyway, shape or form. The only "development" is that they get stronger and that's about it.Honestly not worth the read.
good story so far. Author I'm curious I'd you need a beta reader/Editor? I'm good with English vocab and Grammer. I dont need any money. Please feel free to contact on discord, Fenris#6876
This is really unique. I love the philosophical wisdom, the little science facts and also the cool tech stuff.My favorite character so far is Vicki. She's smart and sassy.
Hello, I'm starting this story cause I dound it fun, so if you like it please send your review and let suggestions in the comments sections, your comments are always a motivation!
Yes, It is yet another shameless author -_-Since it is my first novel, please be understanding about the quality of writing, I am certain that I have improved as I continue writing especially after the ascension (minor spoiler :] )Any questions you may have, comment and I’ll do my best to satisfy your queriesHope you enjoy the book, please make reviews so I know what I am doing right and what I can get better at
William who was releasing his Qi non-stop was starting to get tired, but thanks to his teams help, the Qi was distributed evenly and strengthens his martial art skill. "At this rate we can stay safe inside for at least a day" said William confidently.
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