It feels empty. It feels like the protagonist is maintaining a facade, as opposed to acting naturally. I also can't help but question the practicality of certain events. Posing as a khilman, a supposed battle hardened maniac, that... decided to randomly investigate the appearance of beasts? If the idea was to avoid suspicion why even think to bring up the issue at all, especially when the protagonist insists on using the area as a hunting ground? The actions are completely contradictory, then you have him perform acts of great foresight, as though he planned such intricacies. I don't want an idiotic protagonist, but making him senselessly intelligent will only question the validity of all his actions. Why doesn't he simply have a change of clothes? Why doesn't he enter and leave the town at more reasonable hours to avoid attention? Why doesn't he utilise his makeup kit to take on an appearance or conjure a back story that perhaps gives credence to his late night shenanigans. I'm sure there will be some rationale later on that will somehow justify these actions, but I can't really understand how he can appear so shortsighted.
Author's shameless 5 star review.
Hi guys, so this novel will be the second novel I have published here, I am publishing it for the Fantasy Carnival and I hope to get a good score there.
Anyway, if you have read my previous novel, then you will be familiar with the system, if not, don't worry, it's nothing complicated.
The novel is a dark one, the main character is not like the one, or ones in my previous novel.
So expect a dark world where the main character needs to navigate in order to survive and raise his power.
Overall great book with smooth introduction into the story.
Character development goes with decent pacing, making them well rounded (terms of traits & personality).
World building which is also significant, describes the details good enough for the reader to depict the image of surroundings much easier.
Love it Love it Love it!
I wanna read more about Lyle and what he does next!
Keep it up author-san!
I kinda suck at writing reviews, so this will have to do :P
Its good, but I can't continue reading this as I don't know where else to find it, and I can't "pay"[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
its a very promising book with alot going for it mc isnt scared to do certain things abd has a mindset of doing anything to get the job done within his morals
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Hi guys, so this novel will be the second novel I have published here, I am publishing it for the Fantasy Carnival and I hope to get a good score there.
Anyway, if you have read my previous novel, then you will be familiar with the system, if not, don't worry, it's nothing complicated.
The novel is a dark one, the main character is not like the one, or ones in my previous novel.
So expect a dark world where the main character needs to navigate in order to survive and raise his power.
Character development goes with decent pacing, making them well rounded (terms of traits & personality).
World building which is also significant, describes the details good enough for the reader to depict the image of surroundings much easier.
I wanna read more about Lyle and what he does next!
Keep it up author-san!
I kinda suck at writing reviews, so this will have to do :P
Dunno how to write a review well, so this is all, hahahahahahahahahah
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