Rise of the Abandoned

So I have read up to chapter 1474 and this is my review so far. I like the story a lot but I do think it stalls a lot…spoiler warning…like right now. I do think there are also times the author drags things on for far to long. Now our MC does make a lot of stupid decisions and YES HE IS A SIMP. Ultimately it’s a good story but if you don’t have the patience then this will be a hard book to read examples like a single battle will take over almost hundred chapter that’s just a little to long for my liking but it’s whatever.

This is what I think I deserve after all of my soul I have poured in to this. I rewrote 80k words and what you see now is the rewritten version. I can't say for sure that now this book is  the best you have ever read but its the best I have ever written among all of my other works :DIf you have qns, criticism, praises, or anything else just reply to this XD

I'm not a fan of gaming but your book illustrates the settings, thoughts and emotions of the players all too well. It reminds me of The King's Avatar movie. I don't have background knowledge for gaming so reading the first part confuses me at first. But as I read on, it gets better and you depicted it well. Nice job author!

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「How dare you say you didn't know about it? Raising seeds is the same thing as cultivating monsters. 」

"I'M NOT DRACULA!" He roared, the sound echoing across the battlefield as his form began to change.

"Why Uncle?" then his father replied

Yi Ping was taken aback. The Three Evils of the West was renowned in the martial fraternity for their wickedness and brutality! Not only that, they had killed countless highly skilled pugilists as they rampaged the martial fraternity for twenty-years! That was why they were greatly feared.