Rewriting the rules

Overall, a very entertaining story. The Author got a nice way to develop his view of the overused theme VRMMORPG + Reborn MC + OP Knowledge/stats and mixes elements of many different styles.I'll try to summarize without spoilers:PROs: * Elements mixed from Game stories, apocaliptical stories, RPG, etc.* Good background construction and use of background elements - author could make a better descriptions of citys and sites the MC visits, like describing architeture, climate, but, even so, it's not bad the way it is now.* There are many misteries about the world and development of the story, but the author answers a part of this relatively fast. New dramas are constructed in a smooth way, so that we readers keep entertained.CONs:* Writing quality at the beggining is poor, with a lot of grammar errors. It gets better, especialy after 100 chapters.*MC, sometimes, makes stupid decisions, and repeat some nonsenses. In regards of personality, I guess it's ok (there are times i think he looks to be a psyco). But, stuff like having inventory function, and always hunting for food, even knowing that he cant cook. BTW, he could buy any cooking skill in his travels, or some seasoning!* Author has a nasty habit of tricking his readers with comments outside the author's comment area, and using excessively stat and quest views to increase word count and get paid for text that shouldn't be in the story. BTW, this practice makes me not give 5 stars in all the stories I rate with this practice when they go premium.

Copy paste from bloodscryer's review on NU:Author's note from Ch. 588, explaining gender confusion due to errors in English fan translations.---To make a digression, some readers told me that the book has also been translated on the Internet, but there is a big problem, that is, the unified translation of "祂" into "he

It's a great story, this Meralman has done a great job 🤣:The main character is very humanThere is very good humorThe fighting is very detailed and uniqueThe chapters are longThe author takes time for the story to develop at a logical paceYes... I'm the autor

I decided to write a story that is something different from those weak to strong leading characters. Instead this is the kind of story where our leads are already strong but also underrated or unnoticed, A slightly dark horse vibe. hehehe :)

love the but the is a bit misleading, he has not adapted to one thing yet so it is kind of a bumer

I dislike the representation of talent in this novel. The FL is somehow amazingly talented in everything she does, but it all feels so unrealistic. Ballet and piano take so much effort, and they’re not something you can magically do without daily practice, especially not after quitting for a few years. Like sight reading Liszt perfectly, and doing 32 fouettés by ‘understanding?’ Plus the FL is in high school, and the ML is a decade older than her. Sure, her mental age is 25 because of rebirth, but the ML doesn’t know this, and he still forces himself on her on a regular basis. Not to mention the never ending drama that’s always resolved within just a few chapters; and each of these conflicts are so extreme (like kidnapping, almost getting raped, nearly getting crippled feet) that it feels so unbelievable and stupidly fast paced to have them dealt with by the FL with zero effort and zero effect on her mental wellbeing.

<p>"I guarantee it's completely possible. However, I need you, Plant-Man, Ice-Man, Wind-Dancer, Geo-Girl, and Quake to work together. Seven days, that's all the time I'm asking for?"</p>

An awkward silence fell in the room. They slowly got out of the room. He didn't have anything against them but he didn't want to be distracted right now. The interrogations until now were hard but it was nothing compared to what was going to come next. He was rethinking all his answers and checking them for discrepancies. He also had to think about the others' declarations. It's true, he could blame his concussion, the rush of the moment and make up some other excuse, but it wouldn't look good, especially now that the higher-ups were looking for someone to be the scapegoat and be fed to the public opinion. Who better than him who was already being chewed up? The fact that he wasn't horribly wounded or dead was suspicious. The fact that he let the villain escape wouldn't have been such a serious issue if it wasn't for the dead bodies. They couldn't put him in prison anyway. He was a minor and there wasn't enough evidence, but they could still expel him from the school. The absurdity of the situation almost made him laugh. Twelve hours ago he was deciding whether he wanted or not to kill a man. Not if it was right or wrong, but if he wanted to. Now, he was worried about getting expelled from school. He was bored. It may have been the concussion talking, but he wanted to check on the old man at the clothing shop, to see if he was done. He wandered through the halls, then stole a doctor's clothes and went back to his room. He shook his head at the fact that they didn't even put a few guards. At least to keep the curious away. He leapt out of the window and landed with grace on the ground. His bones creaked a little, but at least he didn't collapse. [I think I'll have to use public transport this time]