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Tô gostando muito da história - O MC é um cara bastante calculista e observado- Gostei da parte da diretora jogando sua magia no MC- Não gosto muito da Flora ;-;

its bad not worth for it to be picked and story is okay some cliche but translation is barely passable and the emotions are too much they look artificial not a true looks like a newbie writer maybe he/$he improved but the first 40 chapters are barely ok

At first I thought it was cool, but then some things stopped making sense. For example, the cultivation techniques are totally irrelevant. The Cauldron Eater is irrelevant. The character development is kind of vague. All the antagonists are the same. As are the characters who interact with Fang Lin.

The Author Here. Currently writing this review to deliver news to you guys. I started this work 5 months ago and had dropped it on the second day itself. and then picked it up 3 months ago. My grammar and English were so childish and cringe back then and I believe I have improved a lot recently because of coming in contact with other fabulous writers. The work is undergoing editing. I have been editing my chapters from the beginning itself one by one. People who read the prologue or people who have already survived (😂) through the beginning chaps might find a lot of changes in the starting chapters. Because I have edited it all out. Talking about the editing, I am currently only editing for spelling mistakes, but have already rectified the grammar mistakes of the first chapter. So please readers. Give this newbie a chance and read my hard work as much as you can and support me. I cannot do this without you guys. TRUST ME WHEN I SAY THAT I HAVE BEEN IMPROVING. AAAAAAAAAA(Goes Ultra Instinct)

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The book was quite appealing. Combining rebirth and Video game in a unique and pleasant way made it quite enjoyable. But I kinda wonder, a guy with eidetic memory and was average Joe..🤷🏻u200d♀️🤷🏻u200d♀️ That's the first... Maybe that what makes this book intriguing... Loves to read more.

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