Revenge For The Alpha Queen

"I'm never gonna find out her name...so I'm just gonna call her Error," I said.

"To be fair," Enzo commented, "you'd have to be pretty dumb to howl loud enough that you announce your presence miles away more than once."

I take him to my room where he starts assembling the cameras. For someone that works for a small website, he is quite professional.

Alright I know I'm the author, but I'm going to try my best to do an honest review of my story currently. (Chapter 44 as of writing this)I'll be honest the introduction of my story is not that good, while I'm happy with the prologue and the first arc. I'm not satisfied with how I wrote the first chapter as well as how situations were written, making the MC not the absolute focus point.In the second arc, I'm way more satisfied, the story is progressing way more with actual worldbuilding, not to mention that I'm way more satisfied with the main cast and how the MC is being written. Now, I know 4 stars is a high rating, but I'm doing this because I know that each chapter is going to be better and each arc is going to be exponentially greater in quality and enjoyment. I'll also answer to any questions in the replies in necessary.

This is peak fiction an its not even me glazing. Potentially the next Orv frfr. Like the story development, amazing. The quality of writing is even greater. Not to mention that we got a lot of updates and character design is spectacular to  behold. World background cannot be compared.

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