Restarting Life In Another World

Great read loved it thank you keep going think you have a great story and plenty possibilities to explore like the Harem vibe that you are creating would be nice to see some that our MC opens his eyes onto all the subtle clues that they drop

Oh, let's see, it's an anime like isekai novel. The reading feels like that the writer himself is an isekai anime fan. I liked the story but the characters design could have been better. Describe the characters more, (eg. what they are wearing). And also certain terms such as "miko" might not be familiar for non-japanese readers. So try to describe what they mean in the story. The concept looks very interesting to me, as an isekai can myself. Overall I pretty much liked the story. I hope you can keep your promise and release at least 1 chapter a week. Work hard.

Interesting concept for sure. Always good to see new fresh ideas! Excited to see where the story goes and how the main character will change and develop.

Good story so far, character development slow but building nice and evenly, in my opinion, overall well done because i can see the scenes in my mind as i read them and i actually care what happens. Hope it continues.

I have made the writing as easy to understand and error-free as possible, but if there are any errors, you can let me know and I will fix it.
I will publish at least 3 chapters every week. I can publish more if I have more free time from work. I am a student + worker but I will do the best I can :)
The story development will be fast in the first volume since it is more focused on building the plot for the future story. But there will be steady development focusing on the world and the characters from the second volume. I know some people like a long descriptive start... But really, I think it would be too boring if the story without making much progress at the start.

The harem: Yes, the pieces are coming together.
The character background: No, even in a fantasy world everyone doesn't have a dark past, and 'I will create a revolution and change the country' like goal... Some may have such background though :P
Isekai: You may find it like every other isekai if you only read the first few chapters... There are twists in the later chapters.

I am a The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy fan so some reference may be used from there. (eg. the world is a program).... :D But there aren't many sci-fi elements here and No gaming elements.

I hope you enjoy the book. Even if you don't, thanks for giving it a try... You guys are awesome :)

So long and thanks for all the fish!!!

Underwhelming 'First Impression', the story telling in this novel is comes off as somewhat immature, naive and forced.

The side characters are just props that rarely show 'true' human emotions, shallow and without depth. Lackluster flow of dramatization, and many confusing contradiction that's made by the author him/herself. And all of that's just from reading the first few chapters.

Well, it's true that people said the key of making a good image, is good "First Impressions". This novel failed to intrigue me, apparently.

For starters, it's just like the typical reincarnation story that everyone loves. The storyline is definitely enjoyable. Sentence construction, writing style, and choice of words are great. However, just like any typical reincarnation with a harem, it needs more uniqueness in it to be noticed. Good job with the plot twist as a Dragon God, though. Keep it up, author. Have fun!

The story is so boring and looks like kids bedtime story that it makes me puke rainbows! Dropped at 26 chapter as I can’t take it anymore.

Qu’Ali of writing is good with some mistakes here and there.

Stability of updates I don’t know so I gave 5*

Story development... There is none! It’s so boring that it hurts. Started ok and that was the best part of the story. They are just training and talking. No action except 5 sentences fight with demon at the beginning.

Character are weak without personality, makes me even forget who is who as the author tries to give them different behavior styles but unsuccessfully.

World background. Is it bad or good I don’t know. Author explains that there is a lot of discrimination from nobles and demons and war and orphans, but there is no hardship in the story! The worst thing the noble does is speak harshly to Demi humans. Everyone is happy, well feed and even orphanage looks like living in a hostel. No demons no fighting no killing. Basically everyone sings kumbaya while holding hands. They are even so nice that they tell their team configuration and strong points to their enemies...

Waste of time.