Are you really translating bro... we your readers are tired as hell. Just to wait for the updates. Or by updating like that. Are you perhaps telling us were not worth your time to update more than this. Cause we dont pay, we just freeloading. Is that what you think
I really really like this novel the plot is very good story but unfortunately its old updateππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Based on what I read, this novel has quite detailed and vivid imagery, especially when describing each character's pain or reactionary. The prologue is pretty good, to be honest especially with the pirate's settings.As for the MC, I think he is fine for now and I like that he has a close relationship with someone. But, I hope I can see more about the background of his life and further development.For the cons, this is my personal taste, but I guess I need to add more detail when showing things such as objects like the pirate ships and character appearance. Personally, I am kind of hard to imagine their appearance since I love to see a well-detailed appearance.I think that's all I have to say, thank you very much and Keep up the good work!!!
I dont see any negative reviews so i suppose this will no be here long. I hava a lot of issues with this one... First is wording in sentences, additional words and explanation of poitless facts over and over again. Next is the story, i got to chap 80 and I am so bored with all the pointlessnes of MC actions and his logic, i thought that if he was a gang member he would be resourcefull if not smat but, but he is just swayed by any little thing and every decision is made by others. There are no feeling and depresion as author advertised... Just a cliche fantasy with nothing new. Only positive is side characters but that cannot save whole book. I hoped for something in there but got only boredom and bad english.
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Amazing book so far. Hope you get better at start writing soon. πI love Rowan as a character at i feel he is really relatable since people can be awful sometimes and sometime they take for granted many things however Rowan keeps moving forward through ignore these people even if he get bruises. GET BETTER SOON ππ
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