*I've written this review after finishing chapter 216.* I really enjoy the world and the idea of the story, but the characters involved ruin it for me. The mc is always saying that he's the strongest and he only uses some percentage of his power and in the next fight, he whines about being powerless. When he was supposed to have shown crazy power in a fight he immediately says that other people are catching up to him. He is also a mixed bag of emotions. One second he says that he doesn't need anyone and he can take on the world by himself and he hates everybody. The next he cries to one of the many ladies that throw themselves at him that he needs love and trust. He literally treats everyone else in the novel like trash and then they all fall in love with him because he's strong even though he is a disgusting, abusive psychopath and they all admit it every so many chapters.Maybe I'm just worked up because chapter 216 brought this to a point for me, but either way, I can't keep reading.
I fell in love with the cover at first sight and based on synopsis it seems intriguing so i give it a try and boiii i didnt regret because the author is doing a good job.the premise is interesting, and the mystery subtly revealed in the first chapter hooked me. there are still few mistakes here and there, but nothing too serious because you can still understand it.looking forward to more. keep up the good job author! ❤️
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The descriptive setting is good, the author hooked me on the first chapter. Stability of updates is 10/10,an author that updates a book twice in a day! Recommended for those people are into steampunk! This is the first book I've read that has the subgenre of steampunk!
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