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The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation.
I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store.
Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one.
In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line.
Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
Good job author, you improved chap after another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions.
The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work
also guys u must read it because this author is very disciplined and always delivers
I just read one chapter and it's good . Better than mine .. This novel is fresh with a new concept if the author didn't mess up than it can also come in top 25. No kidding. Everyone should read it. Keep going author. You can do it. I believe in you. Don't Give up. You can do it...
if we exclude main character,this trash is somhow readable.MC character is worst.up until i have read,he is a scum and no dignity.ASSAULTING woman like its his right.as for story,up untill now there is no plot or anything.just let heroine go,do mission and assault.
This story is fun to read. The interactions between the characters are also interesting. However, perhaps what should be improved is the writing. Sometimes paragraphs end awkwardly. I also feel the variety of words is limited. But, it's still a good read.
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The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation.
I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store.
Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one.
In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line.
Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
Good job!
The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work
also guys u must read it because this author is very disciplined and always delivers
I just read one chapter and it's good . Better than mine .. This novel is fresh with a new concept if the author didn't mess up than it can also come in top 25. No kidding. Everyone should read it. Keep going author. You can do it. I believe in you. Don't Give up. You can do it...
it looks very promising
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