Reincarnation of the SSS-ranked Villain

Avery looked up to the sky, the sun slowly started to set in the distance. He had to speak to the King about Caspian, and he owed Chen a drink. It was going to be a long night.

" Master Luke! Your awake! Oh thanks Lorelei! Guards! quickly summon the Duke and Duchess young master Luke is finally awake".

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