[Hm The last thing I remember is reading fanfiction about the Naruto universe but I don't really remember much else and I seem to be floating in some kind of dark space/room with a bright light in front of me I haven't really tried yet but let's see if I can talk]
"Didn't get much sleep, and I got mostly everything done." Rachel responded with a questioning tone. "Why are you asking? You're on the other side of the room"
While Cinder jumps on the battlefield making it a grudge match for Espeon here as the 2 Pokémon face each other you can feel the tension in the air as I see a large flamethrower at the power level of a hyper beam head towards us. I decided on a new trick I thought of just for this, as I have her use calm mind then light screen on angle as the attack hits the screen it is deflected towards the sky. As I see the slightly shocked face of Kash, while I am thinking that I'm lucky there was enough time time to pull off due to training as she needs to be powered up for it to work as I try Espeon's own dazzling gleam, when I see Cinder covered in flames as he runs through it and charging at his opponent. I try to tell her to get out the way when she gets hit and sent flying before she regains control and uses psychic stop and lower herself gently to the ground. When I see Cinder unleashes a move that can only be one of Kash's fusion moves he makes up as I have never seen anything close to it before, in front of me is a just a flaming darkness radiating from him across the whole battlefield. The only thing I can do is you one of my lat hidden cards in this match up as I tell her to unleash hidden power, as it tears through the attack protecting herself as it lands on Cinder while my vision is blocked due to the attack hitting and a bright light appears. When it subsides I can see an mildly injured Cinder and a tired Espeon, when a great force erupts from the him that slowly gets darker and darker to its as vibrant black waves erupt from him before he charges forward when I try to use calm mind and reflect but the power behind the attack crushes it as he continues to Espeon and smashes her into the wall, knocking her out.
The story is good, it starts off a bit slow but around chapter 10 it starts to kick it up. The reason I say writing is low, is the author needs to use spell check or proof read the work. I’m 48 chapters in and there is so many spelling/grammar issues that takes me a second to decipher their intentions. They also have several areas where they forget what was mention in last chapter or even at beginning of current chapter making contradictory statements, for example they mention the MC was unconscious for nearly 24 hours and half a chapter later that 24 hours has been changed to an hour. All in all it’s a good read, just need to take some time and decipher the author’s intentions for the story. Hopefully this will be seen by author and they can adjust some in the future as it is a great story so far and I want to see it improve and continue.
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