wonderful but I am poor 😢, can't continue reading because of free pass or coins to purchase the chapters, can help? author ain't letting me finish your book , for people who are like me , you better not get addicted to it or you feel pain because can't read it ☹
i just read raws and it was interesting, raws were up to chapter 51 so this novel is new but very interesting. everyone has their preferences and I like this one alot. i play monopoly with friends so it is fun to read it. monopoly is overpowered in this novel nonetheless good to read it! Waiting till it comes up and read it!
Honestly, I'd probably enjoy this story more if I hadn't read Outdoor Webcast first. This feels like a big step down. It's still a decent read, but the main character in this story isn't nearly as entertaining. The whole thing about how hunters are portrayed is kind of weird too. I'd rather see Outdoor Webcast come back even with it's weird Chinese medicine stuff at least it was done in an entertaining way.
Classic Game lit system story and the best part about the story is the game itself. It is very intriguing. The writing is awesome, lucid and flows well. The story pacing is pretty good, and I have shared my feedback with the author about story development in the chapter comment. When the game starts, it is worth the wait. The world building is done beautifully, both in the premise of the game and inside the game itself. The MC is very likeable, boy next door, easy to connect with. The great thing is despite this being a first person, the author doesn't have any unnecessary internal monologues which can be super annoying. Expositions are done expertly. Great work, author. I will keep it in my library simply because I wanna take notes, as a fellow system writer, lol. Please keep writing. <3
Author here people!I have come with a well deserved shameless review. I hope you enjoy the story and the book overall, so don't be shy and go read if you haven't.
This story is a must read for those who seek adventures and especially who love Sci-fi fantasies..!! This author is best in imagination and character design..!!Hope you all get to read this wonderful story..!!
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