Reincarnated As The Hero Ring

I came in to this book having a great expectations and I came out of this book thinking that the author needed to proof read cause what they got now has to be fixed . Ive read the first few chapters and i still think I have the right to say the author needs to fix the book . The author instead of having the mc tag along with the bronze knoght should have had him follow along with the girl and so he could grow along with the girl and get more powerful with her so that would be good character  Development  . Also the mc is so attached to the firl even though he hardly knows who she is He is idiotic and I hate it .

I recommend  Anyone who stumbles upon this review to not read the book this book looks good at first glance . But it turns into an absolute  Dumspter fire later and if you think im just trash talking  Go look at other reviews

Its a  1/10 i recommend you to find a better novel instead  Of this

This novel is good, I like the storyline..

I could tell that the author also improve a little bit. I just hope the author can increase the word count of every chapter cause it just to short for me.

Interesting premise, Promising start. slightly hard to follow after being thrown by the father. Things started feeling random after that. Couldnt make it through volume 2.

Main issue is the plot. grammar and writing could be better but that’s not as important.

Question for those who have read further: does it get better? Does it return to the red haired owner girl?

Note to the author, stating what was said or that something happened takes the effect and action out of the story. Details are your friend and will help your story. also have your characters actually speak instead of saying that they spoke about something, this will add life to your story.

Over all It could be worse.

Look, I'm not going to stand here and act like you guys are all naive enough to not know what's going on in the "obvious Isekai."

Its average joe shmo isekaied into, pause for dramatic effect, the heros ring. A legendary god-tier artifact that no one in this entire world has heard about. And of course the isekai "victim." 'Really hard to sell this genre as a bad time.' Is an overpowered magic mcguffin.

Well he... It? has the potential to be.

Yea, the Pepsi-twist that this generic isekai story going for is that he's a potentially "game breaking" support item for the hero, who does all the fighting.

This is actually interesting and gives the story an air of tension that other fantasy story's don't have.
Real death.

See as top tier loot the protagonist is sort of immune to being killed or destroyed, but each arc's big bad. But the fingers he's on are much less safe. Heck the first couple of chapters convey that lesson very clearly. As he's then stuck to the knight who killed his last "finger detonator."

And even though his new "benefactor" is your generic knight-like champion of justice. The fact that the ring is destined to go to the hero, gives tension to fights.

Throughout the first arc I was worried for the knight, and as strong as he was he was going up against a final-boss-like opponent.

The only thing that is truly holding this story back is the wrighting quality, and the character dynamics. And, slowly but surely both are improving.

i interested in this story cuz of ring mc concept and romance tag and profile pic of the book.
i expected some good development between ring and the owner girl as they grow alongside eachothe.

but story stared to become boring after few chapters and still after 20 something chapter i don't get wat i wanted or expected like a good adventure and relationship
MC IS A WASTE CHARACTER IN THIS STORY
i hope you good luck for this story

nice plot but author can't explain the story. can't build the background. Main character become side character due to lack of screentime in story. Also author jumps from one situation to other(story inside story) which is anything but annoying. let's forget about grammar here.