0w0 I felt really bad that a nice story like this was sitting here rotting with no reviews, so I rated it!
1. Writing quality is really good (as stated above)
2. Stability of updates is good, if you count out the occasional few day gap.
3. Story development is ok, but I think you can do better
4. Character design is a hard one, but I personally like the ring & stuff so yeah.
5. I don't even know what the hell is world background, so no comments on that.
Nice starting to the story. A very new concept to write about. Interested to find out the journey of a ring. Do check some grammer mistakes and use apps like grammerly or proaidwriter for help if needed. Be more stable in the updates
Never gonna ever recommend this trash to anyone, this guy posts chapter as thin as flimsy as paper (I mean very short chapters) and still takes a lot of time to upload.
A pretty good read, but the author definitely needs to get an editor to fix the grammar mistakes. The story is nice though and it reminds me of Reincarnated as a Sword.
I only got to chapter three and while this story has great potential, it is extremely hard to get past the grammar errors. the style of writting Needs Improvement
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There are some grammar error, poor word choice and mistakes but I see that author was also aware of this problem and tried to fix it.
I know it also quite hard to write in a language that is not your native.
It's quite interesting novel and I will follow it for sure
This is a great novel but it would be much better with a little more touch of grammatical sense.
Author if you’re reading this review, I will 100% proofread your story and fix any grammar errors.
If you need extra hands, I’ll bring my buddies over to help!
1. Writing quality is really good (as stated above)
2. Stability of updates is good, if you count out the occasional few day gap.
3. Story development is ok, but I think you can do better
4. Character design is a hard one, but I personally like the ring & stuff so yeah.
5. I don't even know what the hell is world background, so no comments on that.