This novel can be tagged with a life fulfillment or slice of life, which I found it really suit my taste. The protagonist was a middle age man who became disable due to car accident at ayoung age and lost his mother due to her pent-up stress, yet, still kept positive mind and tried to live a good life, until he got into another car accident and died regretfully. But the earth granted him a big chance to relive his life again as a 10 years old kid, with the help of System, and that when the story start. I really love the progress of the story so far. Only down side is the errors in grammatic or some typo, but the good plot and daily update are covering it all. 😎👍
Expecting a fun mix of tomb raider and an uncharted like storyline which will be kind of epic and fun to read and i hope to see the storyline progress into a choatic and fantastic episodes on the mc adventure's.
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There are lots of inconsistencies around the MC first of all he is NOT a villian, he is at most antagonist co.kblocking so called protoganist's chance encounters. One chapter he cant kill proto because heavenly punishment next chapter it is because point farming..They nominate him as a supreme leader to powerfull guild with semi random excuse. Even with everything going on if we somewhat accept MC is villian he is at most 3rd rate villian with extreme Reality Bending sistem.OK, All systems are bending reality but I dont want to talk about our MC lotery wins. Read it and you will understand why I mention it in this particular case.
It's a great book and i loved how thole author would go in-depth and use the dialogue in certain chaps love the story loved the characters and how the characters would act to the problems that are presented by the author, I like how the author has good taste and I seem him worthy of having the title of "A Man Of Culture". I just hopes he doesn't drop the story. 👍👍👍👌👌
READ OR RUN??TRANSLATION QUALITY: Between glaring grammatical errors, names being interchanged and the structure of the novel as a whole, it creates a difficult read. The grammar is ****** which, in theory, should make for an easy and quick read, instead weakeneds the story. The simplistic style highlights all the grammatical mistakes either the author or the translators have made. To be utterly cynical, it makes no sense for there to be as many mistakes as there are due to this being written in a language that is comfortably within the compass of a 10-year-old. They either need to put in more effort, have a new team pick this up or , heck, at this point I will take a freaking editor. All the pLinKesses are making me cringe. I cry bitter hot tears every time I read certain sentences. STABILITY OF UPDATES: Personally, I do not have much of a preference on this. 10 chapters a week is neither a large amount nor a small amount. BUT, there are translators whom push out more chapters a week at a better quality then what we are reading here. If the translation was better I would be more forgiving, but due to simply mistakes I have to give them a poor rating. I am a fan of quality over quantity. STORY DEVELOPMENT: The author needs to learn how to show NOT tell. The entire plot must have been carefully outlined, which makes for an excellent foundation, but fell flat in terms execution. The only details you will get is the author waxing a poetic paragraph over certain beautiful characters' appearance. And the story so far plays out like a paint by numbers or an adventure quide: After reading to chapter 50, I found my attention slipping. I knew that A, B and C would happen and then we would see X result. Then, three chapters later, A, B and C would happen again and then X would, yet again (shocker, I know) be the result. Little to no variation. CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: And then there is the narration. Because the writing is not enjoyable, the narration, in consequence, is not either. Plus, I feel extremely disconnected from the characters, especially the MC. I find myself not caring about the circumstances he finds himself in because there is no suspense. No chance of failure. Each step in Link's character progression is transparent and, worse yet, dull. But not all is a complete waste, the author appears to have written himself into a corner with the MC's ability, making him too OP early on. To counteract this, he creates a system of magic where just because the MC gains the ability to cast spells does not mean he understands the logic and process behind his magic, placing a decent damper on MC's ability. Unfortunately, this is short lived. The MC gains knowledge and understanding at an alarming rate. If you thought the game system, in which, he could purchase spells (Including Legendary, Hidden, ect.)was an OP ability, you are sorely mistaken. The MC's genius level intellect is in fact his largest cheat skill; gifting him the ability to process, plan and react to situations (some life and death), understand knowledge from the modern world he had difficulty understanding in his previous life and recall all information he so much had glanced at in his previous life (such as the forums). . . Relatable, right. Whatever. Part of what makes s successful fantasy is the reader being able to suspend disbelief. If the MC either possessed the genius level intellect OR the gaming system, not both. Both skills balance each other out and compliment each other TOO well. He has no weakness. No faults. Nothing terribly interesting. WORLD BACKGROUND: I find myself more interested in the world, the MC has been transported to the MC himself. Similar to the MC, the reader is drooped into the middle of the story, unlike the MC though we do not possess years of knowledge from gaming. Very little is explained unless the plot calls for it, then we are treated to an information dump on every single thing they hope will distract you long enough till MC's plot armour activates and Houdinis his way out of whatever situation of the week he has landed himself in. I still have little idea how powerful a level 1 is compared to a level 2 or even to a level 3 or 4. Levels are thrown out like yesterday's underwear and I am left with no proper explanation on how powerful someone really us, not just because they possessed a higher number. FINAL ANALYSIS: Run. I would walk across the desert while eating charcoal briquettes soaked in Tabasco for forty days and forty nights than have to read this novel again.
Honestly when i first read the novel, i was expecting something like xianxia: ##### series, but i was in for a surprise, this book is great, cant wait for more.
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