honestly, I got lost in the 3rd chapter, after he got dissed by EVA and made that trash coin pouch, I just couldn't continue after that, the 'flavor' of the writing was a little off for me too
You really made an interesting plot. Although there are mispled words and some grammatical errors. But overall it was a nice story. I hope you continue writing bro.
Unexpectedly good. (As of chapter 39)I’m not a lover of “sis-con” or incest stories. Luckily this doesn’t look like one... so far. And I’m enjoying it.The siblings (not related by blood) seem to have a normal, semi-adversarial relationship. Teasing, fighting and taking advantage of each other when they can. Normal.MC is an average person with an outstanding sister. But he’s not bitter about it. He seems like a bit of a wimp at first, but he does have hidden talents. Even without the System (which is pretty annoying)Keeping in my library for now
Chapter 4 left me on a cliffhanger. Its the kind that I don't like the feeling but its the kind that brings me back to the story and look forward to the updates. I just got a bit confused that the zombies were still referred to as people or person so I had difficulties determining if it was a zombie or a human being. All in all its a great read, I still feel like its too short or maybe I was just too into it that it felt short for me (*≧︶≦))(￣▽￣* )ゞ
This is really good .The author is evolving with each chapter ...I'm glad his relationship with his 'mother' and servant is going well ... that said, I beg you not to drop this romance ... I'm in love with her!
i lobe this one. it is realistic and i'm not talking about the fantasy elements obv, but the genuinety of the characters. they're not flat. world building is gr8 too, no info dumps we get to understand the world with the mc.the sentence structures are impeccable, wide vocab that's far from being repetitive. it is obvious that the author is pulling their weight with this novel. definitely recommend
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