TLDR: AMAZING, must read. Hope it stays this good.
As mentioned previously by a different reviewer; a plant MC and Kingdom building is definitely a huge win. Not to mention the uniqueness of the story, even if not all that different from other system novels, makes it a great read. Although there are only 22 chapters, at the time of this review, and not enough time has passed for us to learn about the world background or new chapter speed, this is definitely going to become one of my favorite novels.
The only cons of the story, so far, would have to be the occasional grammar mishap or the brain f**k when the author mixes a few words up.
good read, and what i hope to read in the system novel, not some wish fulfillment or weak system just to torture MC... the foundation is good i will wait until mc become rank 7 to continue reading.. meanwhile i will give 2 power stone everyday..
after reading till the latest chapter i can say for sure that this is worth the read once you reach chapter 120 were things are finally starting to get fire the grammar is good haven't seen any errors and everything can be understood the world building is good can't get enought and would love to read more if i could travel throught time to when the novel is done so i could binge read it
It's a good read. A Plant MC is unique, and kingdom-building is the cherry on top. It's still too early to say anything about the storyline , but so far it's good. I'm not sure if the author intended it this way, but I hope the system gives MC some options, such as in the skill tree and shop. Also, provide some evolution options, like different types of tree monsters. Also, please explain the significance of level up and "leafling" level up. If possible, describe his new evolved form(s). That's it for my suggestion.
It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea, so I won't lie and say it's the best novel on this site. Give it a read, if you aren't interested in the first ten chapters then you probably won't fully immerse. However, I must say it was worthwhile writing this, so I'm sure it's going to be worthwhile for some of you to read this as well.
Review:
World Background: As of now not much about the world has been explored as it is still very early into the plot. Though I have plans of creating a massive world with its own history and politics, we will have to wait and see if I have the ability to deliver.
Writing Quality: Though I speak English often, I am not a native speaker. That's to say, my writing is readable, but not impeccable. However, I don't believe that it takes much from the quality of the story, but you will notice a few errors here and there.
Story Development: The pacing is rather on the slow side, though it is to be expected with the type of story I am trying to create. As of now, not much has happened in the plot, but it is indeed beginning to thicken,
Character Design: I try my best to give my characters depth, and though it does not show now. I have already set the foundations for future character growth and hence dimension.
Overall an average story told by an average author. Though you would do well not to assume you have any clue whatsoever where my novel is heading. The media I consume is vastly different from that on this site, and my end game will go in a different direction from most third-rate work that is devoured here.
I just wanna add that don't, in the name of the World Tree, don't ever turn him into a human. You can give him humaniod properties and everything, but if MC suddenly becomes human later on, the story loses its uniqueness. And it's like every other system novel.
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As mentioned previously by a different reviewer; a plant MC and Kingdom building is definitely a huge win. Not to mention the uniqueness of the story, even if not all that different from other system novels, makes it a great read. Although there are only 22 chapters, at the time of this review, and not enough time has passed for us to learn about the world background or new chapter speed, this is definitely going to become one of my favorite novels.
The only cons of the story, so far, would have to be the occasional grammar mishap or the brain f**k when the author mixes a few words up.
10/10
Review:
World Background: As of now not much about the world has been explored as it is still very early into the plot. Though I have plans of creating a massive world with its own history and politics, we will have to wait and see if I have the ability to deliver.
Writing Quality: Though I speak English often, I am not a native speaker. That's to say, my writing is readable, but not impeccable. However, I don't believe that it takes much from the quality of the story, but you will notice a few errors here and there.
Story Development: The pacing is rather on the slow side, though it is to be expected with the type of story I am trying to create. As of now, not much has happened in the plot, but it is indeed beginning to thicken,
Character Design: I try my best to give my characters depth, and though it does not show now. I have already set the foundations for future character growth and hence dimension.
Overall an average story told by an average author. Though you would do well not to assume you have any clue whatsoever where my novel is heading. The media I consume is vastly different from that on this site, and my end game will go in a different direction from most third-rate work that is devoured here.
Happy reading.