Extremely boring and bland, frankly just irritating to read. Was actually decent in my eyes until Xuan Yanran, weirdest pedo ever. I feel like the author himself realised how weird it was and tried to mitigate it in the next chapter. I think this because when she was introduce it was said she was 16 years old but then she became 10 years old, this is relevant because she likes the 10 day old MC.
Not to mention the pacing, its so slow, so so slow. I get its a slow cultivation world but when this man is creating heavenly phenomena to still be an infant and in body refinement at like chapter 28...... just do a time skip. The marriage annulment killed it for me I mean come on this Xiao Shui has done like nothing maybe you can argue his family is a bit annoying but the Mc just clowns on him for no reason at all. I just can't.
I have to be honest I am completely weirded out by the novel. You know Twilight right ? That werewolf guy Jacob that saw Bella pregnant with the vampire Edward's child. Smelled her daughter somehow in her belly and decided to raise her kid before getting romantically involve with her ? That is how I felt reading this.
I have read up to chapter 23 and towards the end I could not continue anymore because of how uncomfortable I felt, exact same feeling. Like right that moment MC is two days old and the girl has fallen in complete love with MC both body and mind. I know it's not technically pedo since they are both kids but MC is still a baby. The elders knows, the grandmother of the girl also see through it and thinks it's ok.
Like look, I know the title of the novel and it was because of it I was thinking to myself I will finally be happy to be able to find a novel without romance however not only did I not get what I wished for but I can already imagine reading the next chapters about a little girl grooming MC to marry him later and this is as bad as what Twilight had made me feel.
Translation quality 5
Story development 2 (Very slow)
Character design 1 (Too 1 dimensional)
World background 5 (Takes from other novel, no creativity but ok not bad I guess)
has potential. chapters are very repetitive to pad word count which is incredibly irritating but i like the idea behind the story, so i will stick it out to see where it goes.
if yoi want to read it then come after 5 years but even then mc will only be aeound 5 years no because looking at the unwanted and lot of wastefull chapter it seems so....like he is just baby even after all the chapter..
I am around chapter 64 and i have rarely seen MC pov man like there is only 4/5 pov of mc up untill chap 64 it's tedious and boring but still i am going to see through this poisonous cloud
Pros:
1. A Super Duper Premium System that gives out GREAT things to the MC just by doing really SIMPLE things.
2. Good Drama at the start
3. The starting plot was good
4. MC OPness Flex
Cons:
1. The plot is stretched out. MC didnt even reached adulthood.
2. MC is spoonfed by the system with Top Tier Cultivation Techniques and Things
3. The whole story was basically CUTOFF with a single time skip paragraph at the end. Without even going through all those plot.
4. Harem? He didnt even reached adulthood when the whole story was cutoff.
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Instead of a(literally impossible)baby
Not to mention the pacing, its so slow, so so slow. I get its a slow cultivation world but when this man is creating heavenly phenomena to still be an infant and in body refinement at like chapter 28...... just do a time skip. The marriage annulment killed it for me I mean come on this Xiao Shui has done like nothing maybe you can argue his family is a bit annoying but the Mc just clowns on him for no reason at all. I just can't.
tldr: Slow and Boring
I have read up to chapter 23 and towards the end I could not continue anymore because of how uncomfortable I felt, exact same feeling. Like right that moment MC is two days old and the girl has fallen in complete love with MC both body and mind. I know it's not technically pedo since they are both kids but MC is still a baby. The elders knows, the grandmother of the girl also see through it and thinks it's ok.
Like look, I know the title of the novel and it was because of it I was thinking to myself I will finally be happy to be able to find a novel without romance however not only did I not get what I wished for but I can already imagine reading the next chapters about a little girl grooming MC to marry him later and this is as bad as what Twilight had made me feel.
Translation quality 5
Story development 2 (Very slow)
Character design 1 (Too 1 dimensional)
World background 5 (Takes from other novel, no creativity but ok not bad I guess)
Really bad ped0philia towards a newborn regardless if they saw his future self
Was alright in the begining but after the female chars it went down hill fast
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Pros:
1. A Super Duper Premium System that gives out GREAT things to the MC just by doing really SIMPLE things.
2. Good Drama at the start
3. The starting plot was good
4. MC OPness Flex
Cons:
1. The plot is stretched out. MC didnt even reached adulthood.
2. MC is spoonfed by the system with Top Tier Cultivation Techniques and Things
3. The whole story was basically CUTOFF with a single time skip paragraph at the end. Without even going through all those plot.
4. Harem? He didnt even reached adulthood when the whole story was cutoff.
Advice: Dont read this unless your too bored.
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