The story is excessively drawn out – and by that, I mean EXTREMELY excessively drawn out! What could have easily been summarized in just two paragraphs has been needlessly stretched across ten lengthy chapters, consisting primarily of nothing but side characters' speculation and their viewpoints.
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Let me give you an example: The main character is about to be born, but instead of just telling us what happens, we spend two whole chapters hearing what the other characters think might happen. Finally, the main character is born, and then we get two more chapters where the other characters react with excitement, surprise, and more guessing. And to top it off, there's another extra chapter just to describe all the amazing things that occurred during the birth and another two chapters of excitement, surprise, and more guessing.
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It's pretty much 10% story and 90% side character Bullsht.
I can only hope this one is different.
The premise sounds very similar to "Scoring Sacred Body from the Get Go" that MC was extremely arrogant and manipulative.
I gave this one a chance and read the raws as it was quite entertaining at the start but that is also the best part about it. This novel is just frustrating as disasters to the family keep on happening. Dumb decisions and no character development made me drop this novel.
Spoilers:
There are enemies around every corner, ancient demons and old immortals trying to devour the baby as nourishment but what do they do, just taking walks around the wilderness, foreign cities and even going to secret realms. Why would u take a 6 month year old baby to an ancient secret realm??? Also he starts talking like a grown up after 6 months, scolding his father and other family members(haha my son is such a genius haha, its normal for him to curse me)
150 chapters in and the baby is still just a one year old, so no character growth. He sneaked out so he can go to a secret realm in the north where all other forces are at. For what? To compete with others for resources.
He has a system and is a prodigy himself that advances almost every other day, so why cant he just stay at home for a few years and train there instead of courting disaster everywhere he goes
If you like novel about newborn baby
having harem with 16+ girls and every character acting like idiots instead acting like proper adults. This novel will be for you.
Sounds Cliche.
Op from the start.
Too boring.
You call this Comedy, I call it hilarious Trash.
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Let me give you an example: The main character is about to be born, but instead of just telling us what happens, we spend two whole chapters hearing what the other characters think might happen. Finally, the main character is born, and then we get two more chapters where the other characters react with excitement, surprise, and more guessing. And to top it off, there's another extra chapter just to describe all the amazing things that occurred during the birth and another two chapters of excitement, surprise, and more guessing.
.
It's pretty much 10% story and 90% side character Bullsht.
The premise sounds very similar to "Scoring Sacred Body from the Get Go" that MC was extremely arrogant and manipulative.
Spoilers:
There are enemies around every corner, ancient demons and old immortals trying to devour the baby as nourishment but what do they do, just taking walks around the wilderness, foreign cities and even going to secret realms. Why would u take a 6 month year old baby to an ancient secret realm??? Also he starts talking like a grown up after 6 months, scolding his father and other family members(haha my son is such a genius haha, its normal for him to curse me)
150 chapters in and the baby is still just a one year old, so no character growth. He sneaked out so he can go to a secret realm in the north where all other forces are at. For what? To compete with others for resources.
He has a system and is a prodigy himself that advances almost every other day, so why cant he just stay at home for a few years and train there instead of courting disaster everywhere he goes
having harem with 16+ girls and every character acting like idiots instead acting like proper adults. This novel will be for you.
Op from the start.
Too boring.
You call this Comedy, I call it hilarious Trash.
Bunch of Whack a Load No Sense[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]