A well constructed story. First few chapters manage to pull me in and I'm thoroughly bought by the plot. Characters seems well thought out. Waiting for more ! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
I enjoyed the story despite the numerous translation problems. The largest editing problem is a duplicate of chapter 11 in the spot of chapter 12. They don't seem to have skipped a chapter, but this means chapter 20 is actually chapter 19.If someone is excessively annoyed by inaccurate descriptions being refuted two sentences later, they shouldn't read this.
5 freaking 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟! Its great 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁So far, so good.Im a fan of "system" novels or those with game elements, and i must say, i am enjoying this so far.I love how the MC thinks and act. OP as we all like. Also, the romance so far was pretty nice, it has a harem tag, but i wish its not big. He already has a perfect (for me) girl and i wish the romance bw them prosper more. Anyway, Goodluck author,. Ill be rooting for you.
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Refreshing and very emotionally charged. I am looking forward to see how he wakes up and gains control of the world!! Additionally I love how Aleyria is so filial to her dad. Plus she is so powerful!!
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