The character has no backbone, couldn't even refuse a simple request from a girl. Disappointment. I like the idea of the story, but the characters are just bad. Forced and emotionless. Also, the MC is cowardly and dense. Not being able to connect any information. It was clearly forced for the plot. Ultimately I'm dropping the story because of the MC's lack of strong will to oppose others and terrible character development. Which resulted in a bad MC.
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Awesome! I would suggest everyone to read this story! You will learn a lessom after you read this. I am still sad of what happen to Lia's Father. But I am not a spoiler hehe sorry. By the way author DhaRylLoner I'm still waiting for Book 2! This is so awesome story guys! No one can change my mind!
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