this is a copy paste of a horrible story, making it just as bad., the MC is super Dumb, every single character in the entire story is extremly stupid beyond logic.the characters have no development or growth which makes no sense, teenagers experiencing an entire lifetime of reincarnation without any change or growth in their psyche still behaving the same and thinking the same before which makes no sense at all. characters constantly condradict themselves and forget basic knowledge and common sense that they already know which also makes no sense.the author clearly did not bother spending any time or effort into writing the story.
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Hey author here. As always I'm giving myself a rating. I'm introducing a new type of system in this novel world. A borrowing system. Psst!!!! Here's a spoiler. The MC will borrow items from this system. Don't miss this!!!!!!!
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Not a bad read storywise, what has been published on the other hand… I strongly advise the author to edit and proof read because it needs a lot of work.
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