Regressing Before the Apocalypse: I’ll be Rich and Ready

Shameless author review :) Do read and enjoy this slice of life story. I promise that this story will bring you both joy and heartbreak. Also, let me know how you feel about the story. I am open to suggestions as well.

I love this book, world background, quality....its just fantastic

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Holy WOW! This is one incredible collection!! I have a little question, I noticed that the individual chapters are the story titles that are mostly alphabetized in order and ending in "L".  So that must mean you actually have a ton more stories to upload!? I'd really love to see stories starting with "M" (mom, mommy), and with "S" (step mom, step Sister, sister). Thanks for all the uploads! I really appreciate them! Please don't stop! Thanks

I like the plot of story and lots of the characters and some parts were kind of sad for me but overall I like it and I think whoever made this should keep it up

How Do I Begin? I have no idea.Anyway, this will be a harem novel with powers. The apocalypse stuff happened long ago but it has a lot of influence on the plot a little later on. I'll update this daily but as I'm more focused on my main novel Dawn- an age of darkness, things might be slower. And this is my first time writing in this genre so if anything strikes you funny, do let me know. Do give me all your power stones and hopefully I'll win.

Don’t waste your time reading this author’s books as he never completes them and drops them whenever he thinks the views have dropped. If you don’t believe me check his profile.

I’m doing this review for the author because he requested help in improving his writing. First, I know that it is hard to give a story a rating based on only a couple of chapters and you are new, but there is much that needs to be done.          The grammar of the story is bad. I’m not sure if English is your first language but there is quite a bit of incorrect grammar in your chapters. If English isn’t your first language I give you props as I personally know how hard it is to write in a second language.           The punctuation is not done very well. There is much that could be fixed, but the easiest thing is to break up the page with paragraphs. After you finish a thought you start a new paragraph, otherwise it feels like a run on sentence.         The story is only 2 chapters long, so at this point I can’t really say much as far as character development or even world background. You did make an attempt at setting the preface of the story, but I feel the grammatical errors made it less than it could have been.       I can’t really comment much on update frequency or anything either. The storyline has a similar feel to many of the online novels so I can’t comment yet if you will put your own spin or twist on things and have a truly original feel to it. I believe there is potential but you definitely have a long way to go. I hope this review helps you godtierfreak, and don’t give up. I’ll check on your novel at s later time to see how it has improved.