Records of Rebirth

After reading through half the available chapters so far the only thing I can say about this novel is tha it is way too addicting to put down,The first thIng that sets this apart from your cliche shounen isekai is the plot and character development. It excels at creating realistic compelling characters that are brimming with personality in an equally interesting complex plot with many things happening in the background. Not only that, but the diction is very unique and smooth and you can really feel the thought and effort into picking each word as not only is the author’s vocabulary expansive, but also very expressive and intrigueing and bascially never boring.If I had to use a simile it would be like using a different weapon each time when shooting a target, never missing and always hitting the bullseye which would be how i decribe the author’s mastery and control over their diction. Also with the great character development at the start which features excusively the previous world works as a great contrast and indicator of the mc as she progresses through the story which is a way to make a isekai story more complex and interesting even though most of them once they get isekai’d almost never mention the prevoius world and their past life. The story also doesn’t rush plot and takes it time to world build, which may be slow in the beginning, it makes the world ever immersive.

While I have already created one review for this novel I think I want to go into more detail about my thoughts.

Writing Quality: This book has basically zero spelling/grammar mistakes and is fun to read if you like fantasy and magic! 4.5/5

Update Stability: I gave this segemnt three stars as sometimes the author can go awhile without updating but I can’t really jude because every author has their own writing speed. 3/5

Story Development: The story isn’t that fast but at the same tine isn’t to slow. It takes time to flesh out characters and the world that they reside in. 4.8/5

Character Design/Development: If there’s anything in this novel that really catches my eye it’s the character design and development, each character has something to add to the story and each one has their own thoughts and feelings. Some are loyal and honarable and some are mischievous and scheming it has a wonderfull array of different characters and yet they arent so confusing that you loose track! Overall this is an excellent part of thr story. 5/5

World Background: The book gives us a great deal of knowledge of the world of Aeon but but dosen’t drop so much on us that we forget half of it the next chapter. Also the world has plenty of mysteries that we have yet to discover or explore! It gives us knowledge
in an easy to comprehend way.
Overall 4.8/5

Final thoughts: This book is great and here are some things to expect, The MC is not a genius and does not have a billion iq and is slowly learning about the world around it. The characters are impeccable and I could rants about joe good they are for a long time! Honestly this is probably one of the best books I’ve ever read, virtual and on paper. I will always read this book. I highly recommend! Overall I rate this book a 4.9/5

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Firstly, please update, I want to read more.
The story, concept, writing quality, pacing, character design, character development... everything is done perfectly well.
I've always liked stories with non-human MC and this one really got me hooked.
Aurelia's cheery personality and her witty sense of humor are the highlight to this story.
The teacher/system is kinda an ass but he is a necessary evil I guess.

Lastly, I'm loving this story and I will be waiting patiently for the updates but dont take too long okay..  :P

Author review 2.0 because everyone seems to be doing one and I thought I'd join in!

Things to expect from this story...
1. No OP mc that never faces any problems. I will add that Aurelia is very flawed and some of her decisions will make you shake your head.

2. An mc that acts her age. She's young and it shows! She makes mistakes and as hilarious as they may seem, she does learn from them...or at least she tries to. Wrong things she does at one point, do come back to bite her in the butt. But that doesn't mean she'll keep making mistakes, she's not dumb. She's just learning.

3. Friendship among characters that could be considered enemies or rivals. And yes this includes some reincarnates. Not every character other than the MC is an antagonist. They may have been at one point but Aurelia acknowledges people make mistakes, and she might decide to forgive them - even those that don't deserve it. Or kill them, depending on her mood.

4. Suspicious, sometimes paranoid MC. No Mc that know everything because they reincarnated and have two brains. This mc does not rely on plot armour, so expect lots of questions to be asked about things she encounters because she likes to know...stuff.

5. Characters that have agendas outside the mc. Not every character revolves around her, they may be close but have completely different motives than she does. Some evil/scheming characters are to be expected.

5. Character development for everyone, not just the mc. Side characters will have their own backstories and you will see them changing overtime for better or for worse. Even the mc changes!

6. Romance! Much much much later on in the story, but expect it to be confusing and full of surprises.

7. Slightly slow paced story. Its not slow to the point of crawling, but the first few chapters aren't super fast either because I was focused on establishing a character.

8. Decent writing. I'm not saying it's 100% perfect, you'll get the occasional typo when I proofread too quickly, but I always go back and fix them. Expect some descriptive portions (I like using words to paint scary pictures). But other than that, its alright compared to WN standards...I think.

Generally chapters should be between 1500 to 2000 words, some chapters just end up being longer than I expect

I was able to read eight chapters so far and here is my review:
It has an amazing plot. The introduction was able to grab my attention. The looks of the characters are easy to portray since they are detailed. I could also convey their emotions and character interaction is great as well. The novel is not the cliche type since I was captivated to read further with no typos or errors found when it comes to vocabulary. It was an excellent read and I didn't get bored when reading it. The story development is a bit slow which is fine with me since it does not damage the plot. Another negative I noticed was that there were some misused punctuation but nothing to deter from the read. Another positive thing about the novel is the author's writing style. It is definitely better than some authors here in Webnovel. Paragraphs are also in the perfect length and so far, nothing seemed wordy or whatsoever. Good luck to the author!

The novel has a rather slow start but, trust me! It's all more than worth it! MC is a human who is reborn in another world in a none human body (the way how her race is chosen is pretty funny). She thinks very logically about every situation.  She is accompanied by a system that is not perfect and may sometimes be proved unreliable making for an interesting dynamic between MC and System. The author is really good at describing things, places, and situations bringing the story to life.

It's a good read for those who want an interesting twist on the system genre!

Give it a try!

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