I have currently read up to chapter 565.This review will contain spoilers but I recommend people to keep reading because the entire story pretty much gets destroyed around chapter 500; and I wouldn't want someone to waste his time reading up to that point.Up until around chapter 500 this story was one of my favorite books on this site; the characters were interesting and the concept of having 2 main characters was extremely unique and entertaining.Unfortunately, for some reason the author decided to do the worst possible mistake he could have done, kill off 90% of the characters and story-lines.After introducing and developing many characters and storylines into the book, the author has decided to cut them all of all together by literally destroying the planet on which the story took place.To me it seemed like the author didn't like what he built up to that point and thus decided to completely restart the entire plot line, leaving behind many unfinished side plots, and characters who were introduced but not properly developed.To make things worse, after this "plot twist" took place, the main characters of the story who remained alive didn't show any signs of grief that should have taken place considering almost everyone they ever loved had died.Considering I had a truly loved this book before the major "plot twist" took place, I implore the author to please explain why he decided to make such a unreasonable change to the story.Thank you for reading this review, and sorry for any grammar or spelling mistakes that might have been in it as English isn't my first language.
Writing quality is alright but needs an editor to make scenes transition better. Most of the time you don't realize a time skip has happened or where everyone is.Story development is okay. Nothing to write home about but it's tiresome to keep seeing every man with powers turn into a *** maniac. Character design is utter shit. The mc is a child prodigy yet does the most reckless things despite having an army behind him. Dude has been in too many life threatening situations that are due to his utter recklessness/stupidity.Updating stability is ok.World background is good.All in all I would read this if a decent editor reigned in the bad and spaced out the story. As it is now, it is bad.
Wow actually this is my first time seeing a novel about football, and also there is a system, it looks interesting, I will put it in my collection right away Everyone has dreams that they want to achieve, but reality has always been very harsh.But at least we can find some comfort in watching the protagonist achieve his dream and have his way paved for him...
The story progresses quIte nicely, the workd is fascinating AnD franKly what I‘m most interested In, I like the main Character, his ThoughtS are easy to follow.
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