Reborn to Love You Quentin

<p>"Your Majesty!" he suddenly shouted "Please take the life of this unworthy servant". A passionate shudder seized her, a passionate murmur of unspoken anger passed over her lips "Doctor, I called you here to take care of my future daughter-in-law not to take your life __How dare you display this insolent behavior?" she growled.</p>

the story is so cool! i can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Okay first of all, A good good world building novel.Good concept regarding the MC and his idea to be planted in the new world. I'm interested to see how it develops.there are a few things which could have been in depth and explained to keep readers more hooked but not complaining much.The pace is sometimes slow and fast to understand the book so maybe the author can work on that.And please, please, proofread the MC name, it's being updated as Atlan sometimes from your other novel to this.I hope this novel is not a short one but a good base and more world exploring.Overall a good read. Thank you.

How about Mc get rid of old man in the park and make sure their grandfather don't corrupt Issei? Issei was showing to be very innocent before both of them corrupted him.