A simple yet engaging read. The story flows well and the dialogue between characters is crafted nicely, in addition to the believable atmosphere that surrounds these characters. You can feel what they're going through.
This story has a great amount of plot-holes and a mc with brain problems.To add to that the grammar is horrific and the author switches between perspectives(I/He).I personally can not see why this story has a rating with over 4 stars.Just going back and rereading/rewriting could improve the story imo, as the basic premise is quite decent.
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