Reborn in 2004: Just Here To Get Rich

This story has serious potential to going premium and I'm shocked not many people read this yet give it a shot since it's free it'll give the author a reason to keep writing this hidden gem

"Jangan begini.." ucap Sehun mencoba menenangkannya.

"Take a guardsman and check on them," Artorius ordered sharply, turning to find the guards looking at him and making a brisk ushering motion. "Now!"

You are still holding my hand yet I feel only the coldness of the night. I had always enjoyed your company and the feel of your hand but it's different now. You are different or maybe, I am. Was all of these a dream?

He's starting to panic then he dropped to his knees and grit his teeth and felt a tremendous headache. He's so confused of what's happening that when he realized that the source of the headache is the massive influx of memories he fainted.

I felt relief for a few minutes and fell half-asleep, the heat was gone and that cold air from the air conditioner seemed a blessing to me from the gods but it didn't take long for that blessing to turn into a curse.

Guru Ruyi bergumam sendiri, lalu mengangguk. "Sepertinya aku pernah melihatnya sekali. Baru pada saat itu, hari itu sudah sangat gelap, dan aku tidak melihatnya dengan jelas. "

Grandmother -Sun she is suffering from fever not he is suffering from fever because she is a girl Wright

He coughed one last time, blood spewing from his mouth and onto the ground in front of him. With a disgusting gurgle, he face-planted into the asphalt. Blood pooled underneath the body, covering it red stains.

Sarah gets up and walks towards the bathroom of the mansion where they have lived since they fled the orphanage in which they lived as a child.

Greetings everyone!This is a word for the authors. I've consolidated chapters 2 through 14 into 4 chapters. The content remains unchanged (and a few spelling mistakes rectified) only the number of chapters has been reduced.

The story is original and exciting, but the chapters are a bit too long, try to reduce them in any case I can't wait to see where the story leads