enjoyable novel... good for relax time reading. story is good and well engaging...and important one is not boring. the story keep audience in mood for expecting next storyline
MC was confusing, with several personality shifts that didn’t seem to fit with his stated goals. Up to Ch 40 (when free stopped), it was more like a low-product, poorly managed store than anything like a bank. Banks do not keep reinvesting everything they have in the next deal. Thankfully, when MC got a money-equivalent he held onto a portion of it.I will not even burn passes on this beyond 40, not to mention coins better spent elsewhere
Story so far is pretty lit, I love Ian's motivations and his gradually rise to the top. Not to mention the attention he is gradually attracting to himself. I love his battles vs boss monsters, as it shows his growth and developement. Keep up the good work!
I enjoy reading cliche eastern fantasy novels, but this one was horrible. There is barely any explanation about the world background, and the story progresses way too quick.Something that would be maybe 200 chapters in King of Gods, was already done in 20 chapters here. The main character just nonchalantly becomes an alchemist (which is supposedly super rare), refines a bunch of rare pills, and sells them for millions of gold in a matter of 2 chapters. And everyone acts as if that is normal.
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