wonderful story. it just pulls you in. each chapter makes the story better and better. you just get drawn into the story as you keep reading. i think spelling errors and grammatical errors can be ignored since they are found in almost every book. anyway. this sooks to be a promising book.
I love the storyline of this novel and how you to describe the world is quite good for me, but you must improve your writing technique and grammar overall, i like it!
The major problem with the book is the synopsis... As both the title and synopsis offer nothing about what the book is really about it makes it hard to be intregued by the book to even read the first chapter... That one word synopsis will work if its an author already famous for good work at it would intregue... Just hope author learns from this... First impression that is the title, synopsis & tags are really important...
Lord have mercy, this is some amazing content! I am utterly in love with the authors writing skills, they are out of this world! I bow in amazement, and give you you're well-deserved crown! The story is original, well thought of, and contains some amazing characters! Other than that, i love how long the chapters are - something a lot of people on this app slack on, but not you! I will definitely come back for more, no doubt about it. Thank you for sharing this amazing content with us, dear author <3
I started Reading casually,but the world enviroment and your own progress as a writer is amazing. While Reading, you were able to pick my curiosity on what Will happen when he finds his godmothers. One thing i liked the most too, is that, while the MC has a harem, not every girl Will be part of, as the main goal for the MC is a big and happy family. Overall, i belive your work is a gem, please dont stop writing , for your fans,of course. Sorry for my english, its not my main language!
<p>"Could be, but hate to be the bearer of bad news, your dad's companions and business partners aren't the nicest people in the world. It could be something else entirely too. So I'm going to head out. MJ will come help you guys pack and I'll start looking for your dad."</p>
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