Reborn as a Dragon with Devouring System

Your story about dragon so fresh, except MC skill, but you can make this story being awesome if you not to focus about MC skill, so far i love it, 5 star for your work, keep make the story so fresh, because many story as many chapter as they made, then it being boring about story, conflic and world building, sorry for my english, i just wanna give you advice and praise

Story started great, but after first arcs author reduced writing to just ChatGPT writing. Text are lacking character development, story flow is inconsistent, dialogs are lacking, a lot of important developments are left to implications. Even character names are often confused or written incorrectly.
Instead we have very verbose and elaborate AI writing to just meet word count quota. With minimum human editing.

A lot of wasted potential.

Overall i enjoyed the 16 chapters it has and can not wait for more to release, there were some problems with writing such as similar lines apearing twice in one chapter but i don't mind it since the story is pretty good and i like the characters.

I read till chapter 60 or so and I have to say that this story was quite fine in the beginning. The premise as well as the devourer system of Bruce give this novel a lot of potential. Sadly, the writing of this novel ruins it for me. It reads exactly like if one would have asked ChatGPT to write a text for you, especially in the chapters after chap 10. It’s soulless writing. There isn’t much dialogue, just a lot of contemplation and talk about destiny, strength and power. Even something as simple as taking flight would be described as “He spread his colossal wings and ascended into the air, a testament to his strength and resilience, spreading awe among his followers and proving the power and grace which was innate to his predatory and draconian body.” And that’s still very light. The writing hasn’t got any big grammatical mistakes and it uses many flowery, descriptive words for everything, but nonetheless, the writing is horrible. I’d rather read a badly translated Chinese novel than this robotic abomination.

I'm a suckered for a good dragon story. so far this one delivers. a story from the perspective of a dragon is interesting to say the least.

I love this story but there are some things I would love for you to explore but I'm not here to change your mind because this is already great. I'm just here to say Great Job stay inspired also I have books I have written on here as well.

I like idea of devouring thing but, i hope our mc doesnt get human body, it will ruin an idea.

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