[Rebirth Through Time] “The Best Mother in the Era Novel”

Makes me sad that it ends but it just makes me look forward to a sequel.

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brother author i suggest you change the thumbnail cuz it has been used in many other novels too, like the one where the mc can see future news in his phoneoverall I like the summary and the *Gluttony* attributebest of luck

Gotta say this is a pretty good novel by web novel standards, the premise and setting of the book definitely was not what I expected in a good way. Character development is there, and it is decent, although basic everyone acts with purpose and could be a real person. Mc is logical and practical, not ruthless but definitely willing to do things to get what he wants. Setting is interesting and I am excited to how the world is going to be explored. The brother relationship in the novel is awesome and a breath of fresh air compared to the loner mc or the little sister tropes. Writing quality is decent, the sentences flow well and it makes sense. Overall would recommend to anyone wanting a new fresh take on beast gamer novels. The world works and there are no glaring plot holes to my knowledge.

I love this book, it's amazing! Can be funny, but with serious parts when need. MC is a bit thick at the start, but grows more mature as the book goes along (most of the time). Great detail in fights and world building. Highly recommend

an epic story of reincarnation elaborated through western perspective, full of sarcasm, lack of content, unrefine plot, weird chinese character naming, but fun to read as it is were user-friendly story for three years old kid, while most of the older reader gave too many complaints making the writer failed to graps the essence of eastern fantasy and made the story more to making-fun on Chinese Imagination, yet its still pique others interest, and eager to wait for another chapter.

You should put a meme and parodies tags here!!!!😂😂😂 Anyway.. The idea is pretty good, but, this chapter seems rushed. There are also things that can be fix about the way you narrates this story. I recommend to use third person Point of View when you write more chapters. Well, I can't say much because you only have one chapter for now. I will review again when you have more chapters!! Don't give up!! ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ

I give it a 5 star, just because this book is making me delightful .