This is my second review and I´ve currently released about 100 chapters before I even realized it.Time passed so fast, I want to clarify a few things that might have annoyed some readers or caused them to cringe :3The following list might also help new readers to decide whether to read the story or not.1. My native language is not English and unfortunately, my grammar and vocabulary are not perfect [Sorry for that]It might happen that the chapters from 1-60~ have some minor plot-holes/slightly weird character development and the reason for this is quite simple.I started to write this novel without any prior writing experience and in a foreign language at that. If you can´t bear to read a few grammar mistakes and minor overall mistakes it will be quite difficult for you to binge read or follow me on my journey.2. There were some readers that couldn´t help but lament about the MC´s cringe-worthy behavior because he is emotional…Jason is a youth, barely 14 years old, and had to endure a tuff past… character development shouldn´t be over in a single chapter, right?Furthermore, due to his young age, he might act childish sometimes, even though he is used to behave like he already matured.3. I’m sure that the MC will not have a Harem, but most likely a future romance sub-plot.4. My Novel´s name is [God´s Eyes] but in the end, there are also other aspects, helping him to grow stronger.5. The world our MC lives in is labeled “High-Fantasy” for a reason, please don’t try to use normal physical laws, even though I´m trying to make it a little bit realistic.6. The story is unique, yet slow-paced and I did my best to improve my writing quality/style and every critique previously stated, but in the end, I´m just doing it as a hobby, because it´s exciting and interesting.I gave myself 4 stars because I see that I can improve myself further and I hope everyone will give it a try :3 Thanks for reading the review <3
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Honestly this wouldve been a good story if the MC wasnt a idiot. Like my guy got enslaved and abused and he just accepts it like its normal.. If it were me I would try to escape because from what I can see all her class did was bring him back to life and connect their mana, her orders can still be ignored as we have seen already, he can literally just escape and she cant do anything. The romance is honestly forced because of the above reason man, if you were going to have him be a zombie to her then at least make it so that she is originally his friend that way he wouldnt have a problem protecting her when he got revived :/ Writing Quality - 4 Stability - 3 Story Dev - 2 Character design - 2 World Background - 2
I was searching the app on a wild whim and found this absolute gem, I have never been so addicted to anything in my life. I binged almost all the current chapters in two days and still want more.The characters are written well enough and enough fitting humor is added to keep me entertained no matter how long I read it.
Nandhan_Kumar: The story seems very realistic , it felt like really happened in front of my eyes , they way of narration is excellent.the author really touched people's heart 😀😀
Hello, my fellow Taoist. It's me, the author. ( sound stupid, but the humor was acceptable.) Some asked about genre development, but I'm a newbie, and please accept some mistakes. As the stories still needed to be improved, I'm gladly open to suggestions. Thanks for passing by.
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