Ok I'll change the rating in the future but I'm annoyed that this book was finally release but there are 0 chapters!!!!!! Fix this please!....Am I at 140 yet?
AmazingI like the story ..And the harem .. I hope I can find a novel similar like thisHehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej
Bro love your story. You can write it however you want and what I say should not change whatever you wish to do so I will give my thoughtsYour story is good, it has all the right elements except one. Priya is the heroine but she has no relevancy. Literally every scene of her is *** with Mc so please either make her relevant or just get rid of her Anyway it's your choice
I found myself really enjoying this. The translation is solid and the survival environment is rather interesting. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Writing : Overall, the writing is quite good. There are a frequent errors in the sentence structure, but they don't heavily impact the flow of the story. It would be nice to see a larger variety in the verbiage used, but overall it's good.Story Developement : The story developement is better then a majority of novels on this site. It is slightly faster then a normal book, but not as rapid as other novels. Progression is clear, although he doesn't face many challenges up until chapter 50. He also doesn't try to build up his relationships with people, yet it just works out for him.Character Design : The character design is average. It isn't too descriptive, but it gives just enough so you can have a general idea of what a character looks like.Update Stability : No clue.World Background : World background is less thought out then I'd like. We have no clue how many vampires there are, other species, or even if there are various continents. The weather is always the same, and we have no clue what the castle, town, or his room look like. It's the biggest problem with this book.Overall, the story concept and writing is great, the pacing is good, but the world background needs major improvement. Rating : 3.2/5
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