Just scrap the voting pool already Webnovel. For the second week in a row, the novel with the least amount of votes is the winner of the voting pool. Do they think we're blind?1. MMORPG: I Can See Hidden Information - 1,169,563 votes. 2. I Established A Magic School After I Failed the CEE! - 628,540This novel however...A grand total of 98,370. Although this is descipicable practice it would be tolerable if this story was actually decent. Instead, it's a cardboard cutout. The despair...
It starts off well, but decays at a dizzying pace. Bad end arc, no conclusion of the romance that hinted, lost the initial goal of resurrecting the parents, only to be resurrected later in the last chapter without preparation or anything, he had great xenophobic tendencies, besides that in the middle of the story because he had many ''pets'' and they ended up having poor development in some cases, plus some if you take away from the story it literally doesn't change anything.
Your English is good but the crafting is not on the level, I reckon you study a few like viewpoint, Show not tell, and do mind to keep an eye for the little things that may not seem important as it sometimes sets off the readers.Your main problem I notice reading the first three chapter is that the viewpoint is wrong. it's much like an omniscient telling a story he knows everything about. You should change that to 1st or 3rd person omniscient.and Show don't tell, all the aspiring author get through this, I myself was an example. I fixed this problem through revising as I'm not still good enough to follow.that's all my personal thoughts reading the first 3 chapters. Good Day.
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