RE: REBIRTH MAGE

Sorry to say it but it's ALWAYS the same story in Chinese novel.It's filled with cliches and here we don't have anything new.If there are people who like this kind of novel please answer me because I kinda don't understand how it is a top novel within webnovel ranking.

Is it worth reading? Yes. Normally I don't give LNs 5 stars. This time I did. This LNs story is well thought out and well written. The MC's ability is not SSS+++ and the MC is not OP to the max. This means that there is room for the MC to grow and become stronger. The MC is not given thousands of extracted abilities that will only be used once. The abilities the MC gains do NOT seem to be plot armor driven and are not over the top powerful. They have to be used correctly in the right ways for them to be useful. So far the story has not been FORCED by the plot. I hope the Author continues to NOT use the plot to FORCE the story forward. As in I hope the author does NOT go "Oh you killed that guy and he had a magical thing that told powerful backer who did it and where they are" then after the MC kills the backer that backer seems to also have a backer or is in an alliance and they all come after the MC. All the way to the end of the story. The author has NOT done this yet and I hope the author will NOT do this in the future. It is fine if the MC makes some enemies, BUT lets let them be killed off and not force the plot by making backers keep popping out to come and kill the MC. Let the enemies die off and move the story forward though adventures instead of creating great enemies that have backers and they have more backers and the who world is coming down on the MC. Then the story turns into a Sprint and turns into trash. The author has a great story going so far and I would hate for the author to ruin it. Keep up the great work author :-)

You, reader, must look at my story and think: "Hmm, this looks just like a bazillion of other stories where MC reincarnates into some monster with a system and/or a cheat". And what will I say to you in reply?Yes, on the surface, it is. But! It is my duty as a writer to avoid, at least conciously, all cliches that I could. To play with tropes, think up original ideas and so on and so on.Or maybe you don't care for originality too much. Many don't. Well, one way or another, I hope you will give it a try >:3

I still havent read your story yet but for a good synopsis i will give you a high five star rating. . .  ..

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