Re: Kingmaker; The Overpowered RPG God in a War-Torn World

The story started off strong, and snagged my attention from the beginning . The pacing and the quality of this novel are also pretty good. The first couple of chapters reveal why the mc has his nickname “ The Martial Arts King”.  Everything from the action scenes, to the  various environments are described in depth(which allows my imagination to soar). Another thing I noticed was that the side characters introduced, threw me through a loop. They acted differently than what I was expecting, and I really enjoyed that. I’m excited to see how the Celestial Fist Tournament plays out.

One of the best novels in this site,the world and character building,romance,comedy and action are great,in the start is a bit slow but later it only gets better and you can't stop yourself from want to read more and more.

The premise doesn't really make sense IMO. "I get stronger by doing nothing" - dude, you're a cultivator! Cultivating is basically just that - sitting around and magically getting stronger! You aren't special! Literally everyone else is also doing that!

It's like the author had multiple story ideas and put them into a mishmash of one.He has two simultaneous storylines going on, for the ml and fl.But it was soooooooooooooo arbitrary. Like the story style changes completely from the first dozen chapter.The author tells the reader to read every other chapter if we prefer one protag over the other.But then why even write the story that way?I can't go on reading a story knowing I am probably going to miss half of it. I read till chapter 66, so I know if you  read only every other chapter, you would miss a BUNCH of infodumps and worldbuildings. So what's even the point of saying " If you prefer to only read one or the other lead, just read every other chapter of your preference." if the reader is missing a lot of the technical details.And it's honestly hard to get immersed in a story where each next chapter is about another protagonist.So rather than multiple good stories, we have a mediocre one.Not worth the time. I gave story dev a 1 star.The author also used 2 different time units, for usual things he uses day, minute, second, week, year etcetc but then he inserts ancient chinese time units like shi, shun, ke. Its very confusing.The writing does improve though. but it's still very confusing.

"When I went to the Imperial Palace and was asked what I wished for my contribution to the realm I only asked for an answer, 'How did you highness create such technique?' his answer was simple, he told me that one day he was sitting beneath a tree thinking about human's weakness when he suddenly transformed into a dragon and used this transition to create a technique to simulate the transformation."

May takes her hood down with a tear running down her face "wha-" with a shacking Course throughout her body as she started to stand as shock filled her face.

"Uh...Hagarashi, Gina." She answered. She wasn't used being around such a clamorous girl, so she wasn't sure on how to respond at moments.

Seeing Dai Mubai rushing at him he didn't care anymore and directly used his fourth ability