I'm lazy, but his novel is very good,. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
So far, this is looking pretty good - I mean, for a Webnovel trial read, anyway. It's straightforward, doesn't rely on reactions and padding, delivers what it promises, and has a character that isn't just another generic Xianxia protag.Hoping it gets picked.
The MC Should not start to kill police officers without any reason. The MC mistakenly killed someone and to escape from the police he started to kill. Dude this is not how it works. Change the plot. Either the MC should know that he is killing Felons or the MC and Police should both be a part of the escape program and the bullets are fake. An MC should not go on a pointless killing spree of Police Officers. A MC is like a light(maybe he shines in the light or hides in the darkness). An MC can never kill innocents. This goes against the rule of Protagonists. Or You can also change the crime of Mc and make it that he killed a corrupted high level official and when the police force tries to catch him he only kills the ones who have been corrupt or are up to no good(His system can help him identify the type of police officer the person following him is). This can allow the MC to stop killing innocents and also allow most of the plot to go unedited.
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka
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