Humm dear writer u looks good in this performance.of novel.i.like a.lot but i think is missing something find a good girl for this and have a love hsitry too or only an afeir like is something that devils and gods are soing jejej thanks
Best novelBR AQUI. Novel Muito boa, entra no top 3 pra facil, tentem pq vale a pena de mais.E apoiem o autor pra ele não desanimar e sempre ter mais cap <3
Understandable for the slow update because author is busy but keep it up! i could see the author is trying to write better and saw the change in writing! good luck author! I hope i can understand more about the characters! 💕
The story is still alright in beginning, but as we move past 300 chapters, many plot holes begin to emerge. There is a central mystery that mc noel's family is executed, and FMC Anna had a big role in it. Anna reincarnates then, with future memories. so she tries to co-operate with Noel, whose family was killed because of her. Anna apologies quite a lot, and some secrets are revealed, after which both begins to trust one another. story was still alright till then, and it took 150 chapters to reach here. but after that author has to expand the world somehow, and his logic fails many times. The problem is, author tries to portray mc as quite clever, but honestly the plans of mc and FMC are idiotic, still they get saved every time bcz of plot. there is a villain organisation whose goal is to help demons, and we never understand why so many stupid people are there who whole heartedly join organization. At 600+ chapter, we get to know that this villain organisation targets mc's country only for some reason, and royals support the villain organisation to crush their opponents. honestly mc should leave the nation at that point only, as in other nations he would be valued and there will be no villain oerganisation. Basically, as chapter count increase, plot holes increase
She seemed like a mirage-like something that could not be part of this world, something that could disappear even in front of him like a puff of smoke that even if he guarded her in an iron fortress it could disappear without him knowing, and that terrified him, but he did not want to get too near and touch her since 'what if she is not real and when he touches her, she disappears?'.
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