I am compelled to write this review because most of the reviews given for this novel are MISLEADING, MISINFORMING, and straight up LIE. The novel has no class, bad story development, bad character development, bad world development. I mean if you want to read, then sure but after 20-50 chapters you will come on your own and READ my review AGAIN.Lets talk about:1)Writing Quality:- Quality of writing is not bad, apart from some grammatical mistakes, I don't see anything that can be considered 'mood-destroying'.2)Story Development:- I know this is a cultivation/fantasy novel where MC is born OP. From the 1st chapter author starts describing characters that are heaven defying and renown across entire regions, but by the end of 10th chapter, all of those characters are shivering, wetting themselves and shivering when anything happens. The author doesnt have a proper scale for distinguishing between different levels of power, renown, strength etc. I know that author needs stronger villain to keep the story going but the novel feels like a summary version of a really bad cultivation novel. 3) Nomenclature:- The author is using some kind random name generator for naming everything. If he is naming sect, then he will generate 4 names, add all of them together and add sect at the end, eg: 'Saint Tiger Demon Beast Clan', this is a sect/clan in the novel. And this random name generator is used for naming of cities, regions, weapon class, cultivation class, and everything that exists in the novel apart from Names of humans. 3)Character design/development: Just sad. There is no development for other characters. If you are not a family of MC, you will not progress at all. Only MC & his family are allowed to progress. And I don't want to reveal anything but the MC has not aged one bit from 1st chapter till 150th chapter and he has gone from medium-strong in his own sect to strongest in entire continent. IN 1 YEAR. Author doesnt have any grasp of the TIME.4) World design: Usually any good novel writer will work on the concept, character and the novel setting and much more before starting to write the novel, but our AUTHOR is winging it, I will give you an example:1st to 10th chapter: MC stronger then 90% of his sect. now author needs a villain, bring top dog of his sect and make them fight. after winning MC stronger then everyone. so now author is in need of another stronger villain, lets make a new sect/empire, make an arrogant character of that empire who is more powerful then MC and have them bully the sect or target MC so MC will go and fight and while fighting will become as powerful as the character and win. Now author needs another sect/empire, AND SO THE CYCLE CONTINUES. The novel is written by a CHILD of age no more then 15. Or by a guy who couldn't mature past his adolescence. And it angers me that so many bots were used to give higher rating.
The first 15 or so chapters, the Oc Mc is bullied, harassed, and forced by his system into imbraising and possibly traumatizing situations lied to in order to trick him into buying useless things to further bully him with. If you like having the Mc suffer just to suffer, then you will like this story. If you're like me and don't like those kinds of stories, then don't read this one.
As the author it is a given that I will give myself a good review.This may be my first work but I have some great ideas for this story, though it might take some time for me to get there.I hope you will enjoy my own version of an apocalypse story as much as I will writing it.
Well, now that you have released around ten chapters I think I can give you an opinion.... I really like the story, I would have thought it was basic but I don't get the impression. You have a writing style of your own that I find great (you push your style very far in the last chapters that I read, I love it) The characters are very endearing and they have a personality of their own (even if I have impression that you are hiding a lot from us) and your author's notes are very funny. That's why I give you 5 stars for everything EXCEPT for the stability of updates... Indeed, you come out too randomly. However, you told us that you are trying to stabilize your posts and I am sure that you will succeed, so if you succeed I will really give you 5 stars! good luck, I can't wait for real, to read more!!
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